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InfiNal Clarity Audi^^
« on: May 30, 2011, 07:26:51 am »
Here's My IC Audi.

Stunter : Electric

Editor : ME [ AristoCracKeD]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RiL5aIl9wZ8
o.O AGen! o.O.! Agen! <o.<O
thats Good !
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Re: InfiNal Clarity Audi^^
« Reply #1 on: May 30, 2011, 07:55:08 am »
Constructive criticism.

Try to use more than three effects the whole time. Decent timing, some of the colours were off the beat BUT it still looked alright. During your name sequence, I noticed that you moved the background too far to the right and the white behind it was showing, that's something to watch out for.
Your biggest problems are easily your camera angles, your framerate, and your draw distance. Sometimes you jerk your mouse too hard when you're trying to change the angle, it looks sloppy. Everything is in slow motion (I don't know if you intended for it to be that way, if you did, don't do it so much). Additionally, this might just be me talking, but I don't like seeing the game load the scenery as you're flying through it.

Overall, I think that it's an okay edit, but it's no crew audition.

Was Phandangle.

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Re: InfiNal Clarity Audi^^
« Reply #2 on: May 30, 2011, 08:46:50 am »
I must agree with my friend here.

He pretty much summarised what I was going to say, but in a positive side, you are getting better.
For my own sake, keep it up, and you will get there. And keep in mind my friend, the time will come when you gain the honour of being with us, expanding our organisation.


But sorry, you aren't in. Yet.

Read carefully on what BioClock has said, and try to improve.
Mustapha: That was just so awesome! The atmosphere reminded me of driving in a car, late at night & listening to some late night radio, really ambient feel you've got going on there. The effects could've been somewhat better, but most of the time, they work, the colors at the very beginning are a bit dull, but they also fit with the theme. I just can't get enough of that atmosphere, it is that freakin' awesome! GL in the finals... I mean, in the upcoming match

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Re: InfiNal Clarity Audi^^
« Reply #3 on: May 30, 2011, 11:15:53 am »
I dont have much to say, Just keep trying, as i said in xfire you werent in now you have confirmation :D

When i saw the video it didnt look like it was you :P from last Audi your geting way beter, just not the way we like it.

I suggest you to make some Private tests if you want to practise effects and "new editing" styles.

Savatage made this for me :P

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Re: InfiNal Clarity Audi^^
« Reply #4 on: May 30, 2011, 11:27:06 am »
You seems to love eletric? :D Most of the stunts are from AoN collab that he done :P.

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Re: InfiNal Clarity Audi^^
« Reply #5 on: May 31, 2011, 04:28:21 am »
its better than most members of ic ;)

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