Constructive criticism.

Try to use more than three effects the whole time. Decent timing, some of the colours were off the beat BUT it still looked alright. During your name sequence, I noticed that you moved the background too far to the right and the white behind it was showing, that's something to watch out for.
Your biggest problems are easily your camera angles, your framerate, and your draw distance. Sometimes you jerk your mouse too hard when you're trying to change the angle, it looks sloppy. Everything is in slow motion (I don't know if you intended for it to be that way, if you did, don't do it so much). Additionally, this might just be me talking, but I don't like seeing the game load the scenery as you're flying through it.

Overall, I think that it's an okay edit, but it's no crew audition.

I dont have much to say, Just keep trying, as i said in xfire you werent in now you have confirmation

When i saw the video it didnt look like it was you from last Audi your geting way beter, just not the way we like it.

I suggest you to make some Private tests if you want to practise effects and "new editing" styles.

its better than most members of ic