ok im going to name a few things.
You only did 2 stunts? hardly a stunt video.
To improve, my advice to you.. would be to add more stunts, and maybe make the stunt a little harder
Sniffs is right, no offense this is more of a test edit than a video. you would really want to build shock factor and these whatsoever had no shock factor. and sometimes two stunts won't have that much of a schock factor.
The second thing i want to say is since this is from chaos there should be more done. we've seen you do your skin so we know you should be able to do more from this video first or not. WoS is filled with stunters so don't be afraid to ask someone for ideas.
we're waiting for another vid so make sure it's more chaos than this