A few things i forgot...
Paranoid is just as new in editing as Mike, I've seen mike edit his own solos Paranoid mostly does edit test, I honestly think most of you are just being nicer to mike since you know him more.
But in my opinion both were completely horrible, not because you guys are beginners but because you didn't even take what YOU knew would be bad for a test.
- like the views and how the camera went through walls and objects, etc.
- to much shaking (personally I think it can REALLY ruin part of the vid if the shake isn't used right.
You've obviously watched epic vids that you like yet you didn't take any tips on good editing from them.
Keep practicing though
*And epic preci kyk